I like ho you made the quote stand out in your text. I also like how you made the page look like Facebook, and Facebook colors. I also like how you made the hook a rhetorical question, but the first two sentences should have been joined with a comma instead of a period:). Otherwise, it was really good! -Kalia
I like ho you made the quote stand out in your text. I also like how you made the page look like Facebook, and Facebook colors. I also like how you made the hook a rhetorical question, but the first two sentences should have been joined with a comma instead of a period:). Otherwise, it was really good!
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Nice words and stuff. And the pictures were quite fitting.
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